
Somewhere in Jodhpurโwhere time slowed down between sandstone walls and centuries-old faithโstood an ancient ShivโParvati temple. Its stones had witnessed countless prayers, broken hopes, fulfilled wishes, and silent promises whispered to the gods. That evening, under the soft glow of the sinking sun, the temple courtyard echoed with something far rarerโunfiltered laughter.
An old iron swing hung from a massive banyan tree, its chains rusted with age but still strong enough to hold memories. Sitting on it was a six-year-old girl, her tiny feet dangling in the air, anklets chiming with every forward sway. Her laughter was loud, carefree, and contagiousโlike she didnโt yet know the weight the world would someday place on her shoulders.
Behind her stood a twelve-year-old boy, thin arms pushing the swing gently but protectively, as if afraid she might fall if he pushed too hard. His laughter joined hersโnot as loud, but just as sincere. In that moment, nothing else existed. Not age. Not logic. Not the future.
โVanshu tum kitne acche ho,โ she giggled, gripping the chains tightly as the swing reached its highest point.
โMujhe humesha jhoola jhulaate ho.โ
He smiled, eyes fixed on her back, pushing the swing again.
โPari tumhe maza aa raha hai na?โ
โHaan Vanshu, bahut!โ she exclaimed, then suddenly turned her head, curiosity sparkling in her eyes.
โKya tum mujhe humesha aise jhoola jhulaoge?โ
He didnโt answer immediately. He just kept pushing, as if thinking hardโbecause even at twelve, some promises felt bigger than words.
โHaan, Pari. Humesha.โ
Her laughter softened into something elseโsomething warm, something certain. She slowed the swing with her feet and looked at him seriously, as seriously as a six-year-old could.
โToh phir main tumse shaadi kar lungi. Okay?โ
She said it like she was deciding what sweet sheโd eat nextโsimple, unquestioning, pure. Her eyes shone, completely unaware of how heavy that word really was.
Vanshu froze.
He stopped the swing and walked around to stand in front of her.
โArey Pari, shaadi toh bade log karte hain,โ he explained gently, brows furrowed like a concerned elder.
โJo log ek dusre se pyaar karte hainโฆ wahi karte hain.โ
Pari frowned instantly, lower lip jutting out.
โToh hum jab bade ho jaayenge tab karenge saaadii,โ she dragged the word dramatically, folding her arms.
He sighed, trying to be patient.
โPagal, woh shaadi hota hai. Aur humโฆ hum nahi kar sakte shaadii.โ
Her eyes widened. Hurt bloomed quicklyโtoo quickly.
โKyu Vanshu?โ her voice trembled.
โTum mujhse pโฆpyโฆโ she sniffed, struggling with the word, โโฆhaan, pyaar nahi karte?โ
The pout returned, deeper now.
โMain toh karti hoon tumse.โ
Something in his chest tightened. He smiled softly, trying to make things right.
โUmmโฆ Pari, karta toh hoon.โ
Her face lit up instantly, like clouds parting after rain.
โToh bas phir,โ she declared, nodding decisively.
โTum mujhse bade hoke saaaadi kar lena. Okay?โ
She showed all her teeth in a wide, innocent grinโsealed with absolute trust.
He laughed helplessly and nodded.
โOkay, Pariiii.โ
โPinky promise?โ she asked, extending her tiny finger toward himโthe most sacred oath she knew.
โPinky promise,โ Vanshu replied, hooking his finger with hers.
Two pinky fingers intertwined.
A promise made without understanding.
A vow spoken without knowing the cost.
โChalo Pari,โ he said after a moment, gently pulling her up from the swing.
โAb ghar chalte hain. Dono ki mumma daategi nahi toh.โ
She nodded obediently and slipped her small hand into hisโfitting there like it always belonged. Side by side, they walked out of the temple courtyard, their shadows stretching long behind them.
Above them, the stone idols of Shiv and Parvati stood silentlyโeternal, unmoving, divine witnesses to a bond formed in innocence. A bond that might one day become devotionโฆ
or fade into nothing but a memory.
Only time would decide.
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Authorโs Note
Hey lovely readers,
First of all, thank you so much for picking up Vanshit: Her Devoted Love. This story is very close to my heart, and I wanted to start it with a glimpse of innocenceโthose childhood words that often get buried in time, yet stay alive in someoneโs heart forever.
Vanshit might forget what he once said, but Raanvi never did. Thatโs where their journey truly beginsโbetween forgotten promises and the courage of holding on.
This book will explore love, longing, devotion, misunderstandings, and the kind of bond that gets tested by time and circumstances. I hope youโll feel every emotion as deeply as I felt while writing it.
Your support, comments, and encouragement mean the world to me. Donโt forget to share your thoughts after every chapterโit keeps me motivated to write more passionately.
With love, Akshvi.





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